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Saying Sorry

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Submitted by Dreamsprite on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 9:48pm

We got into another fight again.
My My
I didn't mean to throw
those barrettes near your eyes.
Sorry, really!
I think?
I'm not so sure anymore.
S-o-r-r-y
hmm.
If that word were non-existent
my daily speech would be petrified!
I guess that means I should saunter back up the stairs
to say,
"Forgive me. I think my aim was off, I was going for your head."

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emnoodlehead's picture

Hug Shelly for me... Or is

Submitted by emnoodlehead on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 10:05pm.

Hug Shelly for me...
Or is it Andy?

I really like how you spaced out "S-o-r-r-y"
Neat idea!

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Don't worry sweetheart! We

Submitted by Dreamsprite on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 10:06pm.

Don't worry sweetheart!

We didn't get into a fight today x]

Thanks! I think it's the shortest poem/blog I've ever written! O.O

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"...All you have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to you..."[Gandalf]
Don't know why I didn't come back.

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Oh good!! It is quite short

Submitted by emnoodlehead on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 10:09pm.

Oh good!!

It is quite short for you, but I really like it Hachi
^ ^

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Yay!!!! I is Hachi still! By

Submitted by Dreamsprite on Mon, 03/10/2008 - 10:46pm.

Yay!!!!

I is Hachi still!

By the way! :3 There are 69 chapters of Nana [I think] out on

onemanga.com

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"...All you have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to you..."[Gandalf]
Don't know why I didn't come back.