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ALL MENTORS: Lyrics

Submitted by Hugh Randall on March 18, 2008 - 20:53.

I am asking all mentors to view and criticize a song i've written called "The Messenger" (name may vary) for the LYRICS prompt. My English teacher has advised me to get feedback from you all and from there I can make changes and write some drum music! Thank you all!

Hugh

*(The beat of the song is a fast paced punk rock beat for reference)

p.s. Feel free to browse any of my other work.

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