Nicaraguan Coffee
Nicaraguan Coffee
By Emma Redden
Leland and Gray Union High School, Grade 10
The sun sits high in the hazy sky, tanning your strong back below.
You are a farmer, a true definition of the six letter word.
You live in a home made of cinder blocks, packed mud.
You are lucky, your house is more than bound sticks.
At least concrete isn’t blown down in the winter rains.
It crumbles, but only as slowly as you do.
Your earthen walls enclose a home,
Filled with stuffed burlap sacks,
Second hand clothes, and uncomfortable beds.
At least your babies are nearby when they whimper in the night.
The outdoor bathroom is a simple relief from the
Stuffy stale air of indoors.
A black tarp surrounds a cavern in the ground
To dispose of human waste.
Over the makeshift bathroom
Stand trees, tall and proud.
They are your bread and butter,
Pan y mantequilla.
The lofty tree stands with dignity
Being sole shelter, refuge, protection
For the coffee plant below.
The bananas are still green
The coffee is still red.
Your hands and your back are still tired.
You never stop working and
Yet it still seems never to be enough.
The incredible beauty of the land
Is so harshly contrasted by the
Poverty of your life.
It is as if you were tricked,
Placed in such an idealistic landscape,
With such a demanding daily routine.
Sometimes it seems like it’s an unfair game
And sometimes it seems a gift.
Days are long
Bodies are aching
Eyes are sore
And money is so fragile
The smallest movement could
Break apart the vase of your finances.
But at least you are given the gift
Of spending those long days
In a land painted by an angelic hand.
You are a Nicaraguan farmer.


you
ARE MY FAVORITE.
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wow. well done. :]
wow. well done. :]
UVM Mentor Feedback
Emma,
What a neat poem. I love the way you combine facts (that could have been placed into a boring piece of non fiction) and do something new, fun and exciting with them! Great job! I’m so curious where you got the idea and information for the piece!
I also enjoy your integration of Spanish vocabulary into the piece and it is actually something that I think you could continue throughout. I think it would be a creative way to go just a bit further with the poem. It could represent an attachment or a connection to the Nicaraugan coffee farmers that you write about from a world away.
All in all a great piece of poetry, I encourage you to keep up the good work and perhaps explore conveying other forms of nonfiction in this manner. Think, Creative Nonfiction. You’re surely on to something!
Thanks for submitting,
Natalia
UVM Mentor
thank you :)
Natalia- I wrote this after coming back from a month in a small town in northern Nicaragua. This is about a man we met and his farm. Thanks for your ideas. I am right now going to incorporate more Spanish.
~Emma
thank you!
Natalia- I wrote this after coming back from a month in a small town in northern Nicaragua. This is about a man we met and his farm. Thanks for your ideas. I am right now going to incorporate more Spanish.
~Emma