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hi
interesting enough, I find myself with the opportunity of starting the conversation of this thread... thanks ken! hmm where to start...
I am just really frustrated right now trying to get caught up in my homework, because I am a S L A C K E R in big bold letters! trying to get over my senioritis. trust me, friends, it is a serious problem that you don't want to catch. bad bad consequences.
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
I'm a junior and I think I
I'm a junior and I think I already have senioritis... (wouldn't that be considered junioritis???) And I am a MAJOR slacker ALL of the time. I don't even know what I'm missing anymore... most of the time anyways...
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Humans are merely puppets of civilization. ~Self Quoted
ya.....
this is Apples, everyone... the self-acclaimed genius/insane supposed ruler of my already dominated earth... hehehe
senioritis = not good
we all have senioritis
so, putting 2 and 2 together, all of us = not good
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
Man.... this isn't good at
Man.... this isn't good at all....
And supposed ruler of my already dominated earth???
I already rule this world... foolish mortal! MU HA HA HA HA!!!!!
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Humans are merely puppets of civilization. ~Self Quoted
tis' what you think
Fummeln Sie mit mir, mein Freund nicht herum. Ich kann Sie jederzeit ich wünsche zerstören.
I shall dominate thy every waking moment... gtg... art class calling
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
oooooook.... well.... dibs
oooooook.... well.... dibs on Australia!!!!!
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Humans are merely puppets of civilization. ~Self Quoted
*grin*
*Aside* "hehehe, I knew using German would pay off..."
sure thing... you can have Australia if you want... go ahead and nab North america if you want...
I just want south america and europe...
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
In that case, I get Japan...
In that case, I get Japan... well, at least part of it.
You know how Babbit is, when she wants something, she'll do anything to get it.
Oh, and sorry it took me so long to reply... I was deprived of the internet over vacation.
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Humans are merely puppets of civilization. ~Self Quoted
*bumps apples out of the
*bumps apples out of the scene... *
Ahem... Japan is mine, and hopefully France and Switzerland.... And I would just enjoy England... Yes England... I need the English accents... *they are soooo amazing* hmmmm... I do also tremendouly enjoy other amazing accents... Hmmmmmmm..... Peru... I like peru... ^_^
I have claimed mine a LONG time ago... I am willing to share, but....... Give me........... A garden gnome.... and I will consider... ^_^
*huggles apples and squeejay*
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"you know, if it made sense, I probibly wouldn't have done it...." -Self quoted
SQUEEJAY!!!!!!!
I'm tempted to write an ode to you..... Please??? May I???
*its probibly going to be really weird, like my other odes....*
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"you know, if it made sense, I probibly wouldn't have done it...." -Self quoted
Jeez Babbit, you definately
Jeez Babbit, you definately told me that I could have a piece of Japan... but anyways.....
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Humans are merely puppets of civilization. ~Self Quoted
hehehe
I hope you two never change....
sure, babbit... ode away! :)
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
We've missed you! Where have
We've missed you! Where have you been?
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You can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall. ~Self Quoted
Yeah!!! I get to write an
Yeah!!! I get to write an ode to squeejay!!!!!
*By the way, my thingy got bigger, so If I dont see you tomorrow apples, i would like you to know... my lisp is back and as big as ever.... *
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"you know, if it made sense, I probibly wouldn't have done it...." -Self quoted
heh heh heh
I guess you'll be "thtarting" all over again... heh.
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You can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall. ~Self Quoted
uhhggg
I haven't really had access to a good working computer for the entire weeklong break... but I am back now, full force.
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
Oh, you guys had vacation
Oh, you guys had vacation last week? We had it the week before...
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You can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall. ~Self Quoted
yah
that would explain it. Man. In english, we have to do this project where we write a minimum 30 line poem, composed entirely of unaltered phrases from the book "Frankenstein"
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
Blech... that must suck
Blech... that must suck pretty bad...
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Babbit is an awkward turtle.
yah...
i spent all night the other night finding line after line...
I think i might rearrange the lines to tell the story about how Frankenstein created a horribly beautiful female...
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
Frank!
Oh my gosh and golly, someone else thinks that too?!?! My group did it as an english project last year with an interpretive dance (don't ask). It's up on Youtube now if your interested It's under "Frankenstien: the Untold story". Have fun with your poem! Sorry, I had to get in a plug for my movie.
That would actually be very
That would actually be very interesting to read...
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Babbit is an awkward turtle.
It does sound
It does sound interesting...
*heh heh heh... gets evil plan that randomly has nothing to do with poetry... heh heh heh*
lol
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Grrrrraaaaaaaaannnnnnggggeeeee......
oh man!
I just finished that assignment yesterday. What a pain in the butt.
two hours of last minute flipping through the book, trying to find lines...
i want to get some sleep so badly... but with AP Biology exam coming up, i won't get a wink for a long while...
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
Poor squeejay... You should
Poor squeejay...
You should post the poem here on the site...
And good luck on your Bio exam! Doubt you'll need it but...
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Babbit is an awkward turtle.
Gaw.. I have my AP psych
Gaw.. I have my AP psych exam on Tuesday... I dont wanna go!!!! *runs away*
Today in literary club, we wrote poems on the sidewalk in sidewalk chalk. ^_^ There's going to be a poetry reading in Rutland Next Friday by the way...
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Grrrrraaaaaaaaannnnnnggggeeeee......
AP Psych!!!!
Babbit!!! no!!!
you'll never survive that! my friend has had one continuous headache since taking hers! I took a quarter long psych class, which was boring as all getout, but i dont know how they can make it into a year long class.
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
She's really not that
She's really not that worried about it... well, she is, but not too much.
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Babbit is an awkward turtle.
I got a five on the 1994
I got a five on the 1994 test that is now a practice test... I think I'll do ok... that and I can sleep until... well, how ever long it takes me to get ready... ^_^ Prolly like... until 12:00... yes... nice cozy day in bed because I am excused from all of my other classes... yes... ^_^
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And though I'll think of you I guess, until the day I die,
I think I miss you less and less as every day goes by
Johanna
so...
how did they go, babbit?
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
...
She claims that they were hard, but sort of easy in some parts... I'm sure she got a really high score... probably a 4, maybe a 5. She's a lot smarter than she lets on.
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How does one prove their existance?
Why thanks apples. ^_^ I
Why thanks apples. ^_^
I believe I got at least a 4... I'm hoping for a 5. ^_^
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
way to go, Babbit
me thinks i should have used some Babbit-style quotes for my AP Bio essays...
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
But,
Only her Bio teacher would accept such things from students... he's crazy like her...
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How does one prove their existance?
I dunno...
my bio teacher has gotta be up there... he is one flippin' screwball.
he has toys he plays with to start class off... like a tricycle bell, a squeeky duck, and a pair of plastic chatter teeth that walks around. When one of these sounds, he tells us a corny joke of the day, and then we start class...
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
*coughs*
Well then... I guess he is pretty crazy...
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How does one prove their existance?
Oh my gowsh... thats like my
Oh my gowsh... thats like my bio teacher... He tells us soooo many random corny jokes... And he has weird things... He has a bunch of singing ducks and singing fish things and he has every weird toy you can think of... He also has a pet leach in the aquarium that he could hold for extra credit, and we could eat either sardeens or anchovies too... >_< *both were not really worth it....*
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
My class was actually the
My class was actually the class that gave him that pet leach. Whoopsie!
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Babbit: I have no depth perception....
Yami: The wall has no depth!
Thank you yami.... *But
Thank you yami.... *But alas, it was my fault to choose to hold th leech...*
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
I don't know how you could
I don't know how you could possibly hold that thing. Yuck!
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Babbit: I have no depth perception....
Yami: The wall has no depth!
Agreed
Yucky!
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How does one prove their existance?
It was icky... I held it for
It was icky... I held it for a second, and then I dropped it cuz I freaked out... I thought it was going to suck my blood... T_T
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
Poor Babbit
Why's ya hold it then?
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"I do not need to be remembered. All that matters is that I am here, in this moment."
I like extra credit... And I
I like extra credit... And I like to try new things... As long as they wont hurt me... The teacher said it was full.... So I was hoping he was right...
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
I'd do it. What's the big
I'd do it. What's the big deal?
Just one leech is not going to do any damage.
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"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
It is a bit icky to think of
It is a bit icky to think of a type of worm sucking your blood... Its almost like a real life cheesy horror movie that isn't that scarey because the monster cant really do anything....lol
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
Well....
Leeches are slimy, gross, and I don't like them. If I had like an 80 something in the class, I'd do it to have a better chance at getting in the 90's, otherwise, fugetaboutit.
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"I do not need to be remembered. All that matters is that I am here, in this moment."
He he he he he... Yeah... I
He he he he he... Yeah... I had a 98 and... I didn't need it, but I wasnt going to let the popular girls look braver than me... I wanted to hold it before them because the were scared and building up courage... So... it was more of a different thing than extra credit... lol....
*the truth is now revealed!!!*
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
Whoo! Way to go, babbit!
Whoo! Way to go, babbit! Show those popular girls who's boss!
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Babbit: I have no depth perception....
Yami: The wall has no depth!
But...
You dropped it...
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"I do not need to be remembered. All that matters is that I am here, in this moment."