Falling

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Feels like there is no ground.
No T R U C T U R
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To stand on, and feel safe on.
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Feels like you are sailing through time,
Until you hit the
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JIL <- My attempt at a letter person.
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l l l <- falling lines
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Format
I really like the way that you formatted this, The way that
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goes down, and the way that the word Structure is all rearraged. It's a cool way to write a poem.
Thx! I tried to type it
Thx! I tried to type it horozontally but it came out straight... oh well. i tried..
tip:
tip:
sideways letter person
o>-<
Love the physical imagery of the poem though!
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"As a child I used to think that 'Anon' was a Greek philosopher, when told otherwise, I lost my first real hero."
thx!
thx!