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As it Seems

Katelyn's picture

Dramatic happenings
increase
all behind the scenes
more people are left crying,
yes,
and nothing's as it seems

bluedisch.'s picture

oh, wow, i love your Pon and

Submitted by bluedisch. on May 16, 2008 - 21:31.

oh, wow, i love your Pon and Zi picture :]
I also love the "behind the scenes" feel...it's so true that nothing is always as simple or as "perfect" as it seems. how strange that someone so calm on the outside can be broken in half on the inside. i wish both those people could have a better way to reach out, if they wanted to...
but as for your writing, i love the rhythm of this poem; it's a little bit swingy just because of the way you've placed the words.
well done ^__^

Katelyn's picture

Thank you.

Submitted by Katelyn on May 18, 2008 - 17:39.

*does little bow* I'm glad you liked it and that you understand. It's sad how often it happens...
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If you have to control your thoughts, you're not really thinking.

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