Connected
Our present
Becomes our
Past,
And our future
Is made by history.
It's all connected,
We're all connected,
And if we can't
Change the present,
We will die
As one.
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deep. doesn't really sound
deep. doesn't really sound like you, though. are you ok?
I agree
I love the way it sounds, but its nothing like anything else you've written
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Wow it's so deep!!! I had to
Wow it's so deep!!! I had to read it out loud to fully grasp the meaning, it was so.... deep. Very inspiring, though.
*smilz*
Thank you.
Yes, i'm quite fine, and I agree this is unlike most of my other pieces. But that was what I was going for. I've been writing about the same kind of things a lot. i took a break to kind of... you know, find something more interesting... this is something that came up. *smilz*