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Fire

Chelsey's picture

She hesitated
Again
Not sure that
She wouldn't
Get burnt
But she watched
Them
Do it
And even though
They
Weren't there
She wasn't
About to be
A coward
And she was
Fascinated
So she slipped
Her hand
Through
This fire
This fire that
Wanted her
Soft skin
To stay forever
Tasting
Grabbing
But she wouldn't
Stay
And she never wanted
To move
Wanted to find out
What it really
Meant
To get burnt.

NonSequitur's picture

Wow.

Submitted by NonSequitur on June 30, 2008 - 22:05.

Wow. Great.
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"It's either broken or it's French."

gradster1's picture

-maniac

Submitted by gradster1 on June 30, 2008 - 22:11.

Pyros, unite.

/gradster(1)/

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Yami_no_Tenshi's picture

Very nice! I've always loved

Submitted by Yami_no_Tenshi on June 30, 2008 - 22:24.

Very nice!
I've always loved fire. But I don't think I'd go that far. *glances at little lit match next to her* Hmmmm.... *slowly reaches for flame* Eh...I don't think so...
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Chelsey's picture

Thanks

Submitted by Chelsey on July 2, 2008 - 20:14.

Thanks.
It actually doesn't hurt at all, and you can't really feel the heat more than being right next to it...
After you've done it, it seems so much less dangerous and so much more intriging...

SnowStars's picture

Not to sound immensely

Submitted by SnowStars on July 1, 2008 - 20:16.

Not to sound immensely pathological or anything, but I think it would be fun to walk up to a fire and give it a BIG HUG. :)
Fun for a few seconds, at least.
~SnowStars

NonSequitur's picture

At the TDI reunion, we are

Submitted by NonSequitur on July 1, 2008 - 20:27.

At the TDI reunion, we are NOT having a bonfire.
:)
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"It's either broken or it's French."

SnowStars's picture

:( :( You are SOOOO

Submitted by SnowStars on July 1, 2008 - 20:29.

:(
:(
You are SOOOO cruel.
What if it's at my house?
:)SnowStars

NonSequitur's picture

Well, then, I suppose we

Submitted by NonSequitur on July 1, 2008 - 20:38.

Well, then, I suppose we are.
But if it's at my house, we are not.

(Actually, I don't really care, as long as you pyros -I mean, you guys- don't taunt me with the flames.)

:D
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"It's either broken or it's French."

I LIKE IT!!

Submitted by BlondBlondiie on August 11, 2008 - 14:56.

i feel that way sometimes like if i look pull my hand through the flames, i just want to leave it there, see why people are afraid.. im not as long as i dont keep my hand in. i like it a lot, well done depicts everything i think.

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