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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
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Week 25:The best of Vermont-Schultz

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Submitted by ggevalt on April 13, 2007 - 14:49.

Vermont
Matt Schultz
Brattleboro Area Middle School, Grade 8

I really like Vermont
Even though it's not very hot
There are a lot of pine trees
And some come in threes

It's very cold
And kinda old
There's a lake monster
But no lobster

It's white in the winter
And sometimes you'll get a splinter
In the summer it is green
And no one is hardly ever mean

good job

Submitted by sheena8 on April 29, 2007 - 14:26.

You did a very good job with your paper. I think everything you wrote in your paper was true.
~Sheena~

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