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O2

Anonymous's picture

I heard your breathing;
breath-taking and
breath-letting like an old-
time mediciner harboring the
common-place wives' tales.
You were right by me and
despite our distance
your even breathing was familiar.
The beats an after-thought
like you were born to be
a metronome,
an instant comfort like the
ocean's tides washing away
the tensions I've built up.

I hold my neck too tight
and my shoulders too forward.
I collapse into corners and
fold into tight spaces.
I have no claustrophobia,
no fear of the dark
because just as long as you're
breathing, it doesn't matter that my
legs are numb
and my arms are in the most
twisted of all pretzel positions.
As long as there is nothing
erratic about your oxygen flow in my ear,
I'm doing fine.

mixedmusic333's picture

This is lovely. I suck at

This is lovely. I suck at constructive criticism, so I'm not giving any. :P

(Typos?

You were right by me and
despite OUR distance

The beats an after-THOUGHT)

Can I ask the origin of the title?

mixedmusic333's picture

Wait a second! Is the title

Wait a second! Is the title like C02 without the C? Am I a genius?!

Anonymous's picture

Thanks. :) Ah, yes, the

Thanks. :)

Ah, yes, the typos. Gracias.

Um, O2 is the chemical formula of oxygen, so you got close with CO2 without the C because CO2=Carbon Dioxide so O2=Oxygen without the carbon... Yeah...
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"As a child I used to think that 'Anon' was a Greek philosopher, when told otherwise, I lost my first real hero."

NonSequitur's picture

This is so, so

This is so, so beautiful...
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"It's either broken or it's French."

Anonymous's picture

Thank you.

Thank you. :)
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"As a child I used to think that 'Anon' was a Greek philosopher, when told otherwise, I lost my first real hero."

miss_literal's picture

Wow. This and the thought

Wow. This and the thought of this...wow. Damn, I missed a lot while I was gone.
Nice piece, by the way.

...............
~miss lit~

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