[Untitled] (Obscure and Awsm song) FINALLY PLAYING!
This is an Obscure_One and awsmpossum original. Awsm on vocals and Obscure on guitar and harmony. We don't have a name for the tune or for us as a duo, so if you have any ideas, let us know.
She was young
when she heard screaming from her walls
not too young
to not yet feel respoinsible
she'd been talking
for so long her voice was sore
she was waiting
for her words to matter more
She stopped speaking
when her daddy moved away
she tried so hard
coudln't find the words to say
I love you daddy
I love you most of all
and I believe you
when you say it's mommy's fault
No one knows what it means
to be so young today
no one sees what it is
to be so wrong today
Love to daddy
was the only love she'd give
so life with mommy
was so difficult to live
but then he died
and some truth came to the light
she couldn't figure out
which one of them was right
No one knows what it means
to be so wrong today
no one sees what it is
to be so lost today
Suddenly
all of her memories had changed
she was forced to reevaluate her pain
and since he'd gone
she would never know what's true
forgiving either
was impossible to do
No one knows what it means
to be so lost today
no one sees what it is
to be alive today
gg!
Help!
It won't stop buffering... :(
Typos: not too young to not
Typos:
not too young
to not yet feel responsible
she tried so hard
couldn't find the words to say
First, make sure that the
First, make sure that the keyword is "podcasts," not just "podcast," so that it will show up. (I edited this for you.)
I've had the buffering problem before, and it was because I had posted my song under "blog entry" instead of "podcast." I'm not sure what this is posted under, but that may be your problem.
Good luck! I can't wait to hear this again. It's a beautiful song.
This is so beautiful. And
This is so beautiful. And obscure, very well-written
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~miss lit~
Thanks (and just so you
Thanks
(and just so you know, we wrote it together...)
This is
This is uber-awesome-stupendous! I totally see this as becoming billboards top ten or something like that. You harmonize very well, and I just love this song!!!
“I write one page of masterpiece to ninety one pages of s***,” Hemingway confided to F. Scott Fitzgerald in 1934. “I try to put the s*** in the wastebasket.”
Is it normal...
That i am hearing this with the voices as high as someone who enhaled helium? If it is supposed to be that way nice!
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Credula vitam spes fovet et melius cras fore semper dicit - Credulous hope supports our life, and always says that tomorrow will be better. (Tibullus)