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New Mistake (imagine)

imagine's picture
Podcast: 

Chorus:
This is what a love song sounds like
when I'm not in love.
I can hear the raindrops
racing down from up above,
crawling in my eyes as I
begin to wake,
a beautiful reminder of
my new mistake.

You said
I'm scared I won't find
someone
as good as you.

Me too.

That night
your flesh was my blanket
as I told you that
I was so afraid
of losing you.
You said,
I'll defy the laws,
even if I die
I'll still be with you,
I'm the wind,
I am inside you.

I believed you.

Chorus

Now you say
I don't think I
ever loved you as much
as you loved me.

So what was that night
when you
held me so close
that we were one?
Just a memory,
have you already
forgotten?

Chorus

You once said
I'm scared I won't find
someone
as good as you.

Me too.

ParisianTwist's picture

Its ironic the conversation

Its ironic the conversation I was having while listening to this...

Lately I've just needed to cry.
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No snowflake in an avalanche ever feels responsible.
-Voltaire

Real Eyes: realize: real lies

SnowStars's picture

This is gorgeous. I am sorry

This is gorgeous.
I am sorry that your life is so convoluted right now.
Hang in there.
:)SnowStars

Schila's picture

great chords...

you have a really great voice:)
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Credula vitam spes fovet et melius cras fore semper dicit - Credulous hope supports our life, and always says that tomorrow will be better. (Tibullus)

perspiciens's picture

i love the guitar. great

i love the guitar. great job!

-pur·spikk·inns-

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