Autumn

Aspens flushed burgundy while lilies died in droves.
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This is so great. Would you
This is so great. Would you mind if I tried to incorporate it into a song?
Thank you so much! This was
Thank you so much!
This was one of those times when everything just suddenly came together, and it would be wonderful to see it in a song.
Go ahead!
:)SnowStars
Gorgeous
Gorgeous.
*Burgundy.
Also, maybe you should leave out the "the" before "lilies". This sentence has such a great cadence, but the "the" takes away from that a bit.
:)
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"You poor, simple fools...thinking you could defeat me, ME, the Mistress of All Evil!"
Fixed! Thank you, Mistress
Fixed!
Thank you, Mistress of All Editing!!
:)SnowStars
Mistress of All Editing!!
Mistress of All Editing!! I love it!
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"You poor, simple fools...thinking you could defeat me, ME, the Mistress of All Evil!"