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your country

futurspartan's picture

i love my country
i dont know about you
but if you dont
than kill yourself
because we dont need you
people die for you
and all you can say is
how you support them
and you wont even send them a letter
complaining about how
your life sucks
whall theyre facing bullets
so you dont have to
love your country
love who defend it
because when i go across the sea
i want to know my country has
faith in me, and as long as that is so
ill love it and have faith in it

Geist's picture

I don't love my country, but

I don't love my country, but I support the troops.

They're not one in the same.

qwertygirl's picture

I don't love my country

I don't love my country either

but I don't complain about how life sucks

and I support the troops (depending on what their doing and who they're doing it to)
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)

qwertygirl's picture

By "supporting the troops" I

By "supporting the troops" I don't mean I support the war, I care about those who choose to die for those who support the war (NS had a great way of saying that)
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)

NonSequitur's picture

Loving one's country has

Loving one's country has nothing to do with supporting the troops. I, personally, am ashamed of what our leaders have done, but that doesn't mean I don't care about the hundreds of thousands of soldiers sent to die.

I think the "Support Our Troops" slogan confuses some people. To me, it means supporting the people themselves, those who lay down their lives, not necessarily supporting the reason behind it.

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"Heehee - I love the word assassination. It's like two asses, me, and a nation!" -gradster1

NonSequitur's picture

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Usagi's picture

I support

I support the sacrifice our troops our making, not what they're fighting for.

qwertygirl's picture

There we go, that's the

There we go, that's the perfect way of saying it...
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)

SnowStars's picture

Perfect. Brilliant.

Perfect.
Brilliant. Thanks.
:)Daisy

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Insanity is an impression I like to cultivate. It keeps normal people away.

gradster1's picture

Mates

Does anyone else wish they lived in Australia? Or has anyone else at least imagined that?

/gradster(1)/ - moving to the grooving

http://nmhwu.wordpress.com/

Poet_Jessica's picture

me... but then i thought

me... but then i thought about how hot it is there.... i like cold. i like very cold. i even think that vermont is too hot.
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"Fall down again Bella?"
"No, Emmett, I punched a werewolf in the face."

Geist's picture

Really? Because, you know,

Really?

Because, you know, Southern Australia?

Stone's throw away from Antarctica.

qwertygirl's picture

I would love to live in

I would love to live in Australia... far far away from the Bush administration... plus they have koalas and wombats...
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)

NonSequitur's picture

What's the appeal of

What's the appeal of Australia, specifically?

I always wished I lived in Portugal.

Although Australia has reversed seasons, which is pretty awesome...

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"Heehee - I love the word assassination. It's like two asses, me, and a nation!" -gradster1

qwertygirl's picture

Duh, koalas and

Duh, koalas and wombats!

(although other people probably have other reasons...)
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)

NonSequitur's picture

True, very.

Plus, kinkajous and bilbies.

And, of course, kangaroos!!
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"Heehee - I love the word assassination. It's like two asses, me, and a nation!" -gradster1

gradster1's picture

Okay, then...

I was thinking more like isolation, seemingly Switzerland-like neutrality, English-speaking, and wonderfully amazing (yes, wombats, kangaroos, et cetera, good beaches, cool accent...).

You know.

/gradster(1)/ - knowing

http://nmhwu.wordpress.com/

futurspartan's picture

ok im very oppinated please

ok im very oppinated please dont talk about my countrys leaders i have no beef with you so ill just leave you alone

qwertygirl's picture

We're all opinionated, just

We're all opinionated, just don't tell other people you think they're wrong in suck harsh ways.
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)

ggevalt's picture

Keep it calm...

Folks,

I've done something I HATE to do and RARELY do, I unpublished a couple of comments and made a slight edit on another....

Calling people names, using profanity, threatening, etc. is TOTALLY inappropriate on this site. This is a site that is pretty much under the control of you, the young writers, and I let a lot go, but that is not something that I think belongs here at all.

This site is about words. And PARTICULARLY if you are irritated and PARTICULARLY if you disagree with someone else's point of view you need to be civil and respectful. And if you can't, step away from the computer...

And take a deep breath. Thanks so much.

geoff gevalt
ywp director

qwertygirl's picture

Thanks. _____________________

Thanks.
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)

NonSequitur's picture

Yes, thanks. We appreciate

Yes, thanks.

We appreciate it. ;)

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"Heehee - I love the word assassination. It's like two asses, me, and a nation!" -gradster1

futurspartan's picture

hi

my poem comment center is not a chat room, please take your chat somewhere else, but if you dont have somewhere else you are welcome to use this

fine but im saying hello i

fine but im saying hello i am not chatting simply pasing by

"happiness shines in a cirle of ponies"..words to live by!

futurspartan's picture

hi

yea your ok

hello

i think our country is great but if you look in its past it hasnt been the best one either.

Special's picture

I've been following this

I've been following this blog and it's comments, though staying a safe distance away until now, and i think we should all let this go or someone should make a forum.

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"I've decided that as long as I was going to Hell,
I might as well do it thoroughly."
-Edward Cullen, Twilight

futurspartan's picture

hi

i think that our country has done some bad things to but not everything is perfect and sometimes you need to break the rules

Geist's picture

So you'd advocate breaking

So you'd advocate breaking the law by those who are meant, voted in, and trusted by an entire nation of more than 330 million American citizens to uphold it?

It's not that everything isn't perfect, it's that the people as a nation trusted these officials with their lives to uphold an efficient and sensible government. Taking the largest surplus in American history and plunging it into the largest national debt in the world in four years as well as strangling relations with the Southern part of our continent doesn't exactly support this.

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