Through the Woods
As I run through the woods, nature engulfs me. All around me are trees and nothing else. A couple of brown chipmunks with a white and black stripe that run from the tip of their heads to the tip of their tails; a few gray squirrels jumping from tree to tree, and 3 or so wild flowers blazing with bright colors. I slow to a walk to look around. The smell of pine and maple leaves me dizzy in sweet dreams. I finally sit down under a big oak tree and gaze around.
I look at my watch and see that it’s been an hour or so since I left my home to go running, but I don’t get up. Soon the sun starts setting and I find myself getting very sleepy, but I don’t want to go home. The setting sun brightened with red, orange and yellow colors covers everything before saying goodbye for the night.
When the sun finally sets, the darkness amazes me with blues and blacks. I look at the stars and count them as I lie on my back near the oak tree.
The next thing I know, it's morning and the forest has sprung into life again, just like yesterday. I spring back into reality and think, “My parents must be wondering where I am.”
I race back home as fast as I can. At the end of the forest, where it turns into a lush brownish-green meadow behind my house, I turn and look at the forest. In the back of my mind I wonder,” How can anything be more beautiful?”

Your writing
I really like the dream-like quality of the story you tell in this piece. It's not really a story with a plot that we could say what happened minute by minute. Instead, it's more of a hazy, time-shifting story, sort of like when you have a vivid dream that goes on and on but that doesn't follow a very logical order.
You want to be careful of shifts in verb tense. "I finally sit down under a big oak tree" at the end of the first paragraph shifts from the past tense to the present. Perhaps you want to rework verb tense throughout the whole piece?
Thanks for letting me read and comment!
Andy Alexander
Castleton State College