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Soaring Down the Mountain
Soaring Down the Mountain
By Ursula Casey
Brattleboro Area Middle School, Grade 8
The gears slowly turn on the rusty wheels of the chair lift. It’s moving so slowly that it seems as if the old chair will never reach the top of the hill. I carefully get off, watching the tips of my skis. Although I’ve been getting on and off lifts for almost ten years, I’ll always be a klutz and I fall very often. There’s nothing to stop my clumsiness.
As I set off down the beginning of the slope I think about my first time coming up to the top of the mountain. I was only five or six, and it took a lot of guts for me to ski down from the very top. I start down the first part of the trail, which by now is a long swooping slope with big twists and turns. I speed through it with wide carving turns like a racer running a slalom course. Nothing can stop me now. I love turning like this. It’s fast and smooth, and sometimes the speed makes me feel like I’m flying.
I decide to cut into the woods where I’m all alone; no others are around me. I take short parallel turns now, avoiding many trees that seem to pop out of nowhere, and maneuvering around large unpredictable moguls. There are many obstacles that I need to avoid: logs and little dips and turns. There are dozens of places where I could go crashing down but I never take any of those opportunities. I go through the forest flawlessly.
I come out the other side of the woods into a terrain park filled with many freestyle geniuses who think they own the mountain. Ignoring the rails, boxes and jumps, I speed through, eager to get out of this jumble of spins and tricks. I have a strange need to go over a jump. Just one. I’m unaware of the other side of the lip so I’m unprepared and do not land properly. My skis seem to slam into the hard packed snow, like a heavy weight being dropped from a skyscraper. I wobble and nearly fall, but quickly recover and continue on down the hill.
I always wish that I could live out West where the skiing conditions are amazing. During a trip to Colorado, I had the chance to ski through thigh deep powder. That was one of the most incredible days of skiing in my life. The light fluffy powder made me feel like I was soaring. Going through it with short quick turns took a lot of effort, and it could really tire you out. Anybody who thinks that alpine skiing is nothing but speeding straight down a hill is completely wrong.
Skiing makes me feel so free most of the time. The feeling of the well-waxed skis smoothly gliding over the snow is exhilarating. Nothing can mimic the sensation of floating over the amazing snow. If skiing wasn’t a part of my life I would be miserable all winter, but snow makes it all happen; you can’t ski without it.
As I approach the bottom of the trail, I am not at all anxious to go back through the jumble and confusion of the lift lines and then up the long ride to get to the top. But it has to be done so I can speed back down again, hopefully finding the freedom of flying along the way. But first, I must slow down and wait in the lift line, to repeat the run in an entirely different way, just to get the high I love from skiing.

I love the way you explain
I love the way you explain everything in detail. Good job and I really feel the same way you do.
Wonderful
This piece gives off a very peaceful aura, almost zen-like. Yes, even when you almost crash into the snow.
Really great writing! Keep it up,
-blue
-Blue
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Faith and love are apt to be spasmodic in the best minds. Men live on the brink of mysteries and harmonies into which they never enter, and with their hands on the door-latch they die outside.
blue_sky...
...welcome and nice commenting.
Glad to have you here and look forward to seeing your writing.
gg
Thanks
Well thank you very much gg, I'm very glad to be here.
-blue
-Blue
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Faith and love are apt to be spasmodic in the best minds. Men live on the brink of mysteries and harmonies into which they never enter, and with their hands on the door-latch they die outside.