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Brownie

Submitted by estirewalt on Wed, 12/03/2008 - 3:39pm

Brownie

I remember the day you showed up on our doorstep.
None of us knew if we wonted a puppy,
but then we began to love you.

You were my first dog,
And I will for always think of you as the best.
You always used to whine to be petted.
It always used to make me mad,
but now that you’re gone I miss hearing you whine.

You always loved the outdoors.
You always loved to play.
Now when I go outside I always think of you and miss you.
As much as it hurt to let you go I know that it had to be done.

~ Emily Stirewalt

emily i really like this

Submitted by spellerin on Fri, 04/03/2009 - 10:08am.

emily i really like this poem because i know how you feel. i mean not complety because you and your dog had different memorys but me and my dog had tons of fun together and it was a realy sad day when i came home and he wasnt there anymore

sasha

thanks sasha

Submitted by estirewalt on Fri, 04/03/2009 - 11:26am.

thanks sasha

Dear emily

Submitted by krhodes on Fri, 04/03/2009 - 11:35am.

Emily I really liked your poem. It was full of emotion, and though I have never had a dog before, I know how you feel. I have had cats that I have been really attached to and then they died and I felt really terrible and thought that somehow it could have been my fault.

But just keep your head high and always remember the good times that you had with your dog!
I love you!

~Kimmie ♥

good

Submitted by kduffy on Fri, 04/03/2009 - 11:40am.

i like the poem. It is really heartwarming. keep on doing well with your poems!