if secrets could be captured,
they’d roll right of your tongue,
and run down the drain;
begging to tell me what you heard.
and maybe it’s a funny thing,
because nothing in life matters,
but id sooner die
then let you hurt her.
they’d roll right of your tongue,
and run down the drain;
begging to tell me what you heard.
and maybe it’s a funny thing,
because nothing in life matters,
but id sooner die
then let you hurt her.
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Kitkat
Jul 19, 2018
I'm glad I took French :)
I love the metaphor of a sink draining water/secrets, and I love how efficiently you were able to capture a whole story.
But I'm kind of confused by how the different subjects you talk about relate to one another. How does the first line relate to the next two and those relate to the fourth and that relate to the last four lines?
"I'm not really into quoting other people." -Kitkat