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Trees and the Seven Seas

Submitted by hluce on Fri, 01/09/2009 - 12:29pm

Trees and the Seven Seas

I wish I could give you the ocean,
the moon and the trees,
the stars,
the lakes, and the seven seas.

I wish I could give you the hills,
the valleys and the sun,
the sky,
the fields and flowers by the ton.

Stop,
look until you find it,
not once, but twice,
because it’s all there.

~Hannah Luce

Sweet

Submitted by lomartin on Sun, 01/11/2009 - 9:17pm.

This is great hannah. I really liked how it ryhmed. It made it flow better.

This is a great poem Hannah!

Submitted by asimpson on Thu, 01/29/2009 - 11:07am.

This is a great poem Hannah! I love how it rhymed and how you seemed to bring your emotions into it.

Nice Hannah

Submitted by krhodes on Thu, 01/29/2009 - 11:12am.

I really liked your poem Hannah. You rock! Keep on writing!