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i'm sorry

Submitted by someonebroken on Fri, 03/20/2009 - 9:37am

im sorry i wasnt good enough
for you to show me off
to call me yours
im sorry i hurt you
but i didnt mean to
im sorry for not making you happy
i guess you want to sulk
but now im sorry for
being sorry for things like that
i AM good enough
whether you no it or not
i am me and thats all i can be
no more no less dont second guess
i laugh i live i love and sometimes i wish i would die
you cant change me cause this is me
and all i wanna be
a poet who writes, but doesnt show it
a reader who wants everyone to know
not completely fashionable but at least i try
i try not to show this, but sometimes i cry
my life isnt perfect this is know
all these things im not afraid to show
yet i stopped all the showing for you
all because you told me to
you were embarrassed and i felt bad
so i stopped but now im not
im starting again i love what i do
and i do what i love im not gonna stop
just because you say your the one, your not
you shouldnt be anyone special to me
your just another guy
you shouldnt lead me on
especially if its all a lie
one day its love
the next day its done
youve hurt me too much
to be the one

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I really like this entry. I

Submitted by gabsss40 on Fri, 03/20/2009 - 2:17pm.

I really like this entry. I love how it really decribes how you feel like im actually feeling what you are feeling. I think this relates to almost every teenage girl who goes through guy trouble. I can tell you put a lot of thought and effort into this and its very well written.

thanks

Submitted by someonebroken on Wed, 03/25/2009 - 9:17am.

thanks for your encouraging words

wow.

Submitted by sassy_babe92 on Fri, 03/20/2009 - 2:31pm.

wow this poem is really good. i like it alot because it is true. most of the relationships that anyone is in, they have to change to become the person that the other one wants and when they dont then they will get dumped and hurt. nobody deserves that. i can relate to this a lot and i think you did a great job describing everything..

i found a mistake you made tho... "whether you no i or not" i think that you should take out the i and have it "whether you no or not". that would make a little more sence. lol.

thanks

Submitted by someonebroken on Wed, 03/25/2009 - 9:20am.

thanks... it was actually supposed to be
"whether you no it or not"
i fixed it...