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And That's When I Fell Off the Side of the Earth

so I was walking
when
she caught up with me
and whispered
in my ear
and walked away
and that's when I fell off the side of the Earth

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hmmm...

I don't really know why I wrote that. It's one of those things that sounds good in my head, but makes zero sense on the page. Yet, I still kind of like it...

first_and_amistad's picture

Did something she say catch

Did something she say catch you off gaurd, or like what? Did you just feel like falling off the side of the Earth? (If humanly possible>Dont think so)
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"You break me away,little by little, you remind me of peanut brittle"

"Here we go round the prickly pear, prickly pear prickly pear, here we go round the prickly pear, at five o'clock in the morning.

first_and_amistad...

i guess it was more of a really long metaphore. i think it would literally translate into "she just told me something that surprised me and changed my life, so everything was very different", except that doesn't sound as good.

first_and_amistad's picture

Okay I get it

Okay I get it _________________________________________________________________________
"You break me away,little by little, you remind me of peanut brittle"

"Here we go round the prickly pear, prickly pear prickly pear, here we go round the prickly pear, at five o'clock in the morning.