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Storm Clouds and Rainbows

Submitted by 4linz.lu on Tue, 09/22/2009 - 5:00pm

good morning storm cloud
nice to see you
today
you have come to rain on
my smiles
my parade

well hello there rainbow
I didnt see you
there
you have come to make
me laugh
and whipe away a tear

oh and look here comes reality
such a pleasant
surprise
you have snapped us back
to reality
and storm cloud and rainbow
say goodbyes

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This is such a cute dialog...

Submitted by Schila on Tue, 09/22/2009 - 8:04pm.

or is it monolouge... Ummm Whatever the case... I love how you personify both rainbows and storm clouds... The end espically was good... It reminds me of those calvin and hobbs comics where calvin builds a picture perfect town of sand... then creates an earthquake to mess it up...

Reality sort of shatters the happiness... Sorta like a "getcha head in the game" type of thing...

 

-Schila

"I'll be there..." 2010

thanks! I appreciate it.

Submitted by 4linz.lu on Tue, 09/29/2009 - 5:13pm.

thanks! I appreciate it.