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Jealousy

Submitted by Braelynn on Tue, 12/08/2009 - 6:34pm

I am drowning
in a black whole,
filled with things I do not know.
Something that is dark and low
hides within our minds, Oh, no.
On our fears it does feed,
And our thoughts it does mislead.
But who is it that commits this evil deed?
Jealousy,
the green seed.

tangerinesunset's picture

Good job at sneaking those

Submitted by tangerinesunset on Thu, 01/28/2010 - 8:58pm.

Good job at sneaking those rhymes in there and still maintaining the strong nature of your poem!

You're so right... jealousy truly is the green seed...


Only those things are beautiful which are inspired by madness and written by reason. ~ Gide