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The Awakening

Submitted by the madd writer on Thu, 12/17/2009 - 1:46pm

Anger is my Bliss
Happiness is my pain
The anger burns
I’m in the deepest pit of hell
Love is a chain
Hate is freedom
Love chains me to a beautiful hell
Love burns as it flows through my bleeding heart
Hate frees me from a barren heaven
Hate flows like a winter stream
Life is torture
Death is enviable

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I am in awe. This is writing

Submitted by ktdennis on Thu, 12/17/2009 - 2:04pm.

I am in awe. This is writing in its purest form. Your writing is beautiful even with the sad twisted words in this piece. Keep writing.

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I Love This!

Submitted by Vazrtre on Thu, 12/17/2009 - 5:56pm.

Very beautiful and artistic!

Amazing

Submitted by BC13 on Mon, 01/04/2010 - 6:58pm.

I love it. I simply love it. Words can not describe the emotions I can feel pouring out of this. It's the kind of writing you want to see in every book you open.
Keep writing! It's the best work I've seen so far.