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The Battleship Potemkin

Submitted by iseeyousee on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 2:28pm

While
seas of white hats
rush about and revolt
and crowds cheer noiselessly
and black-clad workers yell
at the top of their [silent] lungs
and blood is spilled
as feet hurry down
city steps

The pianist
plays on&on
occasionally
crossing one hand over
the other.

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Very evocative!  One question

Submitted by wingpoet on Wed, 06/19/2013 - 10:15am.

Very evocative!  One question though: what inspired the title?

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