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I Care... A lot

Submitted by Illusionist Andrew on Sun, 05/29/2011 - 10:23pm

 I wanted you to know

 when you hurt so do I

 no matter how bad I feel it too

 I just wanted you to know

 you CAN talk to me

 and I will tell you the TRUTH

 things aren't as bad as you say

 as they say

 Who cares?

  "They" shouldn't matter

 but they do

 Just wanted you to know

 I WANT to be there for you

 Could you let me already?

 You're not alone

 You're not nothing

 

Why did I write this?

Why does this happen?

Why do I try so hard?

because

 

I CARE

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JordanPike19's picture

Small poem, yet so strong. I

Submitted by JordanPike19 on Mon, 05/30/2011 - 4:33am.

Small poem, yet so strong. I know how you feel. I hope this person reads this! And good luck to you! :)

~Jordan~

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If she hasn't already seen

Submitted by intrepid_heart on Mon, 05/30/2011 - 7:35pm.

If she hasn't already seen it, then she needs to. It was really nice of you to write this.

I liked how the last part wasn't lined up with the rest of it. It made it stand out and paved the way for the font-size change.

"And as always, innocent like roller coasters."

we need a like button...

Submitted by Athena16 on Mon, 05/30/2011 - 7:46pm.

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The ones who say they'll never hurt you hurt you the most.