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Fallen Humanity

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Submitted by RogueArtist on Tue, 07/12/2011 - 4:19pm

Lickety split,
a girl and a girl,
she crawls in a pit,
say "hello darling".

 

Twisted inanity,
fallen humanity,
all I want is some tranquility.
Do you hear me?

 

Excuse me.
I ask question,
you answer,
simple simple.
 

Lickety split,
humanity falls,
not loving the
gender supposedly
assigned to us.
 

Excuse me,
I say comment,
you say
nothing,
simple simple.

 

Lickety split,
a girl and a girl,
she crawls in a pit,
say "hello darling".
 

Twisted insanity,
fallen humanity,
all I want is some tranquility.
Do you hear me?
 

Humanity fallen,
leave me alone,
alone with lonilness—
Hey, you blew it,
not loving the
gender you were
supposedly assigned—

 

humanity
Dead.

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amazing

Submitted by Pug on Mon, 07/18/2011 - 8:27pm.

This is by far the boldest thing I ever saw written. I loved the repetition in it. By far my favorite stanza is: 

Twisted insanity,
fallen humanity,
all I want is some tranquility.
Do you hear me?
That is by far the best stanza I ever read from you or this site. This is extremly powerful. Keep up the outstanding work.

Pug

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Pug—

Submitted by RogueArtist on Tue, 07/19/2011 - 7:30pm.

Thanks, friend.

Rogue