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Submitted by Mini_little_me on Wed, 07/13/2011 - 10:04am

 

Do you remember the night we didn’t go crazy, you arms wrapped around me? Watch as the stars fall from the sky this is your fate now, we’ll be alright, don’t make a sound. The light it all melted, leaving us breathless as people grew wrestles. This is our fate no space for mistakes even when we trip over our shoes. Do you remember the sun, when it blinded all others leaving us just for each other? As planes fell out of the sky, they were all burning alive but here, now, we are only just dreaming.

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i luv this!

Submitted by olive911 on Wed, 07/13/2011 - 4:37pm.

 this is a-maze-ing haha :) i still want to eat it! this might be even more powerful if you spaced the piece more like if you started new paragraphs with your stongest lines or someting you know? lo-ove this! :P

"I you switch the letters 'i' and 'o' around in Olive, it reads i-love."
-The Twenty-Fifth Annual Putnam County Spelling Bee

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Oh my God

Submitted by Blackrose on Thu, 07/14/2011 - 8:51am.

This is amazing. i love it!!! I agree with olive911 about the spacing.

This is so amazing! I agree,

Submitted by EmmaFP on Thu, 07/14/2011 - 8:54am.

This is so amazing! I agree, I think it would be better with different spacing so people read it slower and can take it all in.