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One Sentence Poem

i.LO.VErmont's picture
Submitted by i.LO.VErmont on Tue, 08/02/2011 - 5:41pm

 

Whether or not

you’re totally bought

on the idea of being a line or a dot,

just know that your choice

will reflect your voice

and show others that you can be what they cannot.

  • 1052 of 1954

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alexislynn27's picture

Fantasmerific!!

Submitted by alexislynn27 on Tue, 08/02/2011 - 5:53pm.

I love this sooooo much. It's all one sentence, but it seems like it's not! and it's powerful.

fantasmerific job. !!!!!!

KEEP IT UP! :)

 

♪♫AlexisLynn♫ 

 La critique est aisée, mais l'art est difficile.

 

i.LO.VErmont's picture

Haha

Submitted by i.LO.VErmont on Tue, 08/02/2011 - 6:02pm.

Thank ye!

And I've noticed your use of the word "Fantasmerific" in a few other comments... that truly is a great word. I may have to borrow it from time to time. :) Haha

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