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Up In The Tower
Up in the tower
Where I sit
The sun rises so early
So beautiful
And so quick.
But I was told
That a prince
Would come so quick
To my rescue
Oh what a trick.
No one is coming
Nothing but the moon light
Who comes without a request.
I’m all alone up here
Or so that’s what I thought
But that’s when I heard a young,
Handsome voice
That carried up
And into my world.
He tried and he tried
But he couldn't grasp on
The wall was too slick
And so he was gone.
Without another try,
Without another leap,
He waved his hand up
In frustration as I weep.
But he’s gone
So long
I didn’t need you.
Because I have my tower
The sun
And the moon.
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I really like this
I really think this blog post should come with an applause button.
Well done!
The point was well make. I like how when you first introduced the moon you didn't like it so much and in the end you did...
Again, very very well done! This is my applause anyway:
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:)
Bravo.