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I'm back, not home.

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Submitted by McWriter on Sun, 08/14/2011 - 12:14pm

i.

She saw my

tears from her perch

miles

away

& she didn't want to

(she cried for me

regardless). 

 

ii.

I walked

away 

- always the last

to go -

& I didn't want

to.

(I did

regardless.) 

 

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Mc--

Submitted by RogueArtist on Sun, 08/14/2011 - 9:46pm.

Yes. Lividly real. Haunting. Beautiful-- a masterpiece.

Rogue

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Submitted by McWriter on Sun, 08/14/2011 - 10:53pm.

Oh. Thank you, dear.

-Mc 

Ta.