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Watch Me Fall

Ophelia's picture
Submitted by Ophelia on Wed, 10/12/2011 - 6:42pm

Ha.

Remember how we talked?

All those crazy ideas.

 

Funny,

all the promises we made

all the plans

how childish.

 

Silly, isn't it,

how we did everything together?

How it was me-and-you and you-and-me?

What a thing of the past.

 

Odd

how things change, isn't it?

Ridiculous

how we thought we would always be best of 

friends?

 

No hard feelings, 

of course not

No feelings at all.

It's fine, you stay up there

and watch

me

fall.

 

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So rigid, you can feel your

Submitted by jacketbundock on Wed, 10/12/2011 - 8:18pm.

So rigid, you can feel your tension. i feel this piece, it's amazing. Great job!

 People say if you look down, you will fall, but if you look up, will you fly?