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Medicinal Poetry
You sound like my doctor
Saying Sylvia Plath is bad for me
That I should take two Shel Silverstein
And call you in the morning
I’d like to know where you got your degree
In medicinal poetry
You read me Dante by firelight in Italian
It’s the only Italian you know
And you wouldn’t know what you were saying
If you hadn’t read the English translation a hundred times
Poetry is not the only way that you and I connect
But it is by far the best way that we know
I’d e-mail you Lewis Carroll
When I was feeling whimsical
And within two days
You would flawlessly recite Jabberwocky
And when you wanted to scare me
All it would take was opening up the mailbox
To find a handwritten copy of
The Pit and the Pendulum
To send me screaming
I didn’t talk to you for three days after that
You didn’t care
Neither did I, really
If I hadn’t wanted to be scared
I wouldn’t have opened it
Poetry is what you would quote at me
When I was sad and alone
And whenever you felt scared and lost
I would wrap you in verses like satin ribbons
We never wrote our own poetry
Your fingers would always fumble
On the keyboard of your laptop when you tried
And the pencil lead always breaks when I try
But here I am
Speaking words that do not belong to Shakespeare
But words that belong to me
The best part is
It doesn’t matter if I don’t do it right
You will never care
That I can’t write poetry
You will never care
That I am not Emily Dickinson
Because you know even through a haze
Of sloppy metaphors and spelling errors
Exactly what it is I’m trying to say
I can’t write a proper closing line
So I guess I’ll just take the easy way out
Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
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DarkDecember...
This was truly wonderful--humorous and touching, it has more backstory than twice as many words could offer. Interestingly, my ear hears a lot of slant-rhyme in this, and you might want to cultivate that and accentuate it in the places that don't have so much.
Otherwise, I have just two minor comments. The first is that, unless you consciously decided to, you don't really have to capitalize the first letter of each new line. I used to do that, but since have been told that people actually find it distracting, thinking it's a new sentence. Secondly, and along the same lines, punctuating a poem helps with the flow--maybe not commas all over the place, but a period or colon after "so I guess I'll just take the easy way out" helps the reader to know a longer pause is required.
Love the ending!
~Titania
An idea that is not dangerous is unworthy of being called an idea at all. ~Oscar Wilde
Titania-
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much! :)
The capitalization is a personal thing- it rarely looks right to me unless I capitalize the first letter. And thank you for the advice about the punctuation- I will look over this poem again and see if I want to put any in there.
I'm glad you like it, and thank you very much for the comment and advice,
December.
I wish I were pretty/I wish I were brave/If I owned this city/I would make it behave -Let the Rain, Sara Bareilles