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Medicinal Poetry

DarkDecember's picture

You sound like my doctor

Saying Sylvia Plath is bad for me

That I should take two Shel Silverstein

And call you in the morning

I’d like to know where you got your degree

In medicinal poetry

You read me Dante by firelight in Italian

It’s the only Italian you know

And you wouldn’t know what you were saying

If you hadn’t read the English translation a hundred times

Poetry is not the only way that you and I connect

But it is by far the best way that we know

I’d e-mail you Lewis Carroll

When I was feeling whimsical

And within two days

You would flawlessly recite Jabberwocky

And when you wanted to scare me

All it would take was opening up the mailbox

To find a handwritten copy of

The Pit and the Pendulum

To send me screaming

I didn’t talk to you for three days after that

You didn’t care

Neither did I, really

If I hadn’t wanted to be scared

I wouldn’t have opened it

Poetry is what you would quote at me

When I was sad and alone

And whenever you felt scared and lost

I would wrap you in verses like satin ribbons

We never wrote our own poetry

Your fingers would always fumble

On the keyboard of your laptop when you tried

And the pencil lead always breaks when I try

But here I am

Speaking words that do not belong to Shakespeare

But words that belong to me

The best part is

It doesn’t matter if I don’t do it right

You will never care

That I can’t write poetry

You will never care

That I am not Emily Dickinson

Because you know even through a haze

Of sloppy metaphors and spelling errors

Exactly what it is I’m trying to say

I can’t write a proper closing line

So I guess I’ll just take the easy way out

Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?

 

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Titania's picture

DarkDecember...

This was truly wonderful--humorous and touching, it has more backstory than twice as many words could offer. Interestingly, my ear hears a lot of slant-rhyme in this, and you might want to cultivate that and accentuate it in the places that don't have so much.   

   Otherwise, I have just two minor comments. The first is that, unless you consciously decided to, you don't really have to capitalize the first letter of each new line. I used to do that, but since have been told that people actually find it distracting, thinking it's a new sentence. Secondly, and along the same lines, punctuating a poem helps with the flow--maybe not commas all over the place, but a period or colon after "so I guess I'll just take the easy way out" helps the reader to know a longer pause is required.

 

Love the ending!

~Titania

An idea that is not dangerous is unworthy of being called an idea at all. ~Oscar Wilde

DarkDecember's picture

Titania-

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much! :)

The capitalization is a personal thing- it rarely looks right to me unless I capitalize the first letter. And thank you for the advice about the punctuation- I will look over this poem again and see if I want to put any in there.

I'm glad you like it, and thank you very much for the comment and advice,

December.

I wish I were pretty/I wish I were brave/If I owned this city/I would make it behave -Let the Rain, Sara Bareilles