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The Pacifistic Sun’s Shine

cgmion1's picture

Part twisting were the teeming winds
That were howling mid the heather,
Where the sunlight caught the mid-flight spores
Like a nimbus of feign feathers.
There, throstles trolled fleeting hymns
While lucent rays refracted,
Playfully spun and craftily shunned,
Off its pinions and thin limbs:
A shade, a trace, blotched pale against the sun
In the nothingness of its abyss
Where known universe was picked undone.

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Archibald the Prophet's picture

Very Cool

So I posted this to the front page. I really liked the descriptiveness of it. It does a good job of painting a picture in my head. Great work!