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Indestructable Ink

Ciel the Sky Mortal's picture
Submitted by Ciel the Sky Mortal on Fri, 03/30/2012 - 6:38pm

I like to write in pen

Then there's no temptation

To erase how I feel

My true self is exposed

They're all still there

All my errors and opinions
 

My real thoughts

 

Even if you scratch it out

You know there's more to it

You cant change who I am

You can cover me up

Throw me away

But I'm still there

 

My true self

 

The original

Unaltered

Unedited version

Is the real me

And no one will change me

It's permanant

 

My real self

 

And when I want to change

I'll open a new page

In my own hadwriting

With my favorite black pen

Write the new me

In indestructable ink

 

My indestructable ink...

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Ardoise's picture

LOVE!

Submitted by Ardoise on Sat, 03/31/2012 - 12:52pm.

I really love this! :D It's very awesome and has a strong voice to it! Though I found something that you might want to fix.... In the 15th line there is a small typo - you spelled original with an 'o' instead of a 'i' in the middle part ^_^

Ciel the Sky Mortal's picture

Okay thanks I fixed it! :]

Submitted by Ciel the Sky Mortal on Sat, 03/31/2012 - 6:53pm.

Okay thanks I fixed it! :]

"Even if it lands you in a straight jacket or a padded cell, play the game, but play it your own way."

Archibald the Prophet's picture

I love this because...

Submitted by Archibald the P... on Mon, 04/02/2012 - 8:53am.

It's so very true. I like how you sort of compared your personality to a rough draft of piece of writing. I like that idea. very impressive!

Ciel the Sky Mortal's picture

Thanks! :)

Submitted by Ciel the Sky Mortal on Mon, 04/02/2012 - 7:38pm.

Thanks! :)

"Even if it lands you in a straight jacket or a padded cell, play the game, but play it your own way."