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Brief Spurt of Creativity (Now Gone)

Submitted by somebody_else on Tue, 04/17/2012 - 5:44pm

I don't understand how

you can be so dis-
                              jointed and still keep yourself in
                                                                             sync
                                                                             with

                                                                              the world
                                               

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Zabira Silver's picture

The words make a

Submitted by Zabira Silver on Tue, 04/17/2012 - 6:05pm.

The words make a staircase.

Are you going downwards or upwards?

~Silver ∞

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Wow.

Submitted by zeusfireair on Tue, 04/17/2012 - 8:25pm.

Just... wow. for some reason reading that little scribble-poem thingy, (words. I'm good with them.) then Silver's comment just really hit me hard. I don't even know how to put it, it just really was impressive how in sync that seemed. I've already forgotten what the exact feeling was, but I really enjoyed that feeling of... whatever it was. Thank you both for sharing that.

-zeus

(by the way i dont usually comment about other comments, this just hit me really hard, so I shared)

 

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