Losing Voice

When we write,
do our
voices
become
confined
to that empty
space
of white,
each black slash
marking
making
mixing
an emotion
what is it
that tells us what we
can
and cannot
say?
ourselves.
Ourselves
we are
our own
censorship.


Wow... on it's own, this
Wow... on it's own, this poem is powerful. Listening to it, though... it feels like I'm being slapped in the face. Amazing.
I was hoping that my
I was hoping that my voice
would bring back
the meaning
a little bit.
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"Characters are only the pawns of Reality, and reality must begin somewhere." ~Self Quoted
Powerful.
Your voice added so much more... meaning... to it. It's amazing.
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It's not reality that counts; it's perception. ~Self-Quoted
Well, it's absolutely
Well, it's absolutely awesome. I love the way you read it and the whole message of the poem. Great job! :)
NICE!
You read with such feeling! It is so awesome.. Meaning is pretty well done in just the poem, but with the reading, it is so much better! Great work! You should totally podcast more of your poems!
Rock on!
Schila
Wow
OK, reading it, I'd be like, hey, cool that's interesting, but hearing it spoken so powerfully, and dramatically... Wow! It gave me chills. That takes a lot with me. I'm impressed, by the reading and the writing!