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I think of him often
his laughing grin,
is kind words.
always a helping hand to reach
a smile to encourage
what is wrong with me?
Who hasn't been in this situation?
This was a very relatable piece. I'd just suggest running it through spell-check though, and perhaps even removing all punctuation from it. I'm just think that the punctuation is slowing this poem down. Maybe consider it?
But I honestly do love the minimalistic nature that it has; great job!
"The purpose of a writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself." -- Albert Camus
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