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Abuse to Love

apples's picture

Why do you hit me?
Why don't you love me?
I'm supposed to be your pet
"Man's best friend"
That's what I'm called
But all you do is
Yell at me and
Push me around
Can't anyone save me?
My pain never ends
Unless other people are around
Then I'm safe
But only for a little while
I try to hide
But you always find me
There's a knock on the door
And I hear a man
Say my name
My ears perk up
My tail wags
He pets a leash on me
And takes me away
To a new home
Where I'm loved
And I'm never attacked
I'm finally safe
I don't reember the man
But I will always
Be thankful for him

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apples's picture

An explination for the

An explination for the denser people on this site *coughBabbitcough*, this is from the POV of a dog.

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

I think it's awesome!! It's

I think it's awesome!! It's so cool someone loves dogs this much.... and I also think you should contiue it... like write more blogs on how a dog's like is (like Daddy come home blogs)

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

apples's picture

That's eventually what's

That's eventually what's gonna happen... this poem was because of one of my dreams...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

awwwwwwwwww now you're even

awwwwwwwwww now you're even thinking like a dog! good job!

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

Writingdog:::

How old are you Writing dog?

When you read my work you will be blown out of your seat!

- Autumn

writingdog's picture

12

12

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

Usagi's picture

Ooh...now I feel old. But

Ooh...now I feel old. But Apples is still older than me--a fact he likes to bring out.

apples's picture

Usagi:

heh heh... are you 14 or 15???

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

my sister is 14

my sister is 14

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

apples's picture

So she's only a freshman in

So she's only a freshman in High School... Most freshman are annoying... but there are exceptions (Like Usagi)

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

yup that's her. a freshie.

yup that's her. a freshie. yup. she is very annoying and turning meaner by the minute. and so today I was minding my own business during lunch, but I love to talk. So then I began talking to her. And you know what she does? Pours her drink which happened to be orange juice on my food. I was so mad!

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

apples's picture

See, I have absolutely no

See, I have absolutely no self control and would get her back BIG time... but that's just me...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

maybe but I bet she would

maybe but I bet she would tell my mom and dad. And they would probably be on her side because revenge isn't the way to solve things. But they DID give her a long talk. so I guess it evens out. Sometimes I don't know why I'm even nice to her

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

apples's picture

That's how it always is...

That's how it always is... the little sibling is always so nice and the older one is always so mean... that's life for you...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

ya and I'm even making her

ya and I'm even making her this present but I don't know if I want to do it anymore

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

NeonKiwi's picture

*cough*

Ahem.

writingdog's picture

well it's not like for her

well it's not like for her birthday or anything

_______________________________________
"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

MM's picture

That sounds incredibly

That sounds incredibly immature. Even my sister doesn't do that and she's 12. Where do you guys go to school?

MM

apples's picture

RHS

RHS

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

Professor_Zoom's picture

You don't mean...Rochester

You don't mean...Rochester High School, do you?
please say no...
You see, my school has some hard feelings towards their basketball teams.

apples's picture

Rutland High School

Rutland High School

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

Professor_Zoom's picture

Phew. Thank you for

Phew.

Thank you for relieving my fears, friend.

apples's picture

Any time...

Any time...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

I go to ADL and she goes in

I go to ADL and she goes in EHS. Well, actually she is mature. sometimes too mature. Like she always bosses me around and everything. Sometimes I really dislike her. And she is SO annoying. She's like GET OUT OF MY ROOM! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

apples's picture

I'm sorry... oh, and Usagi

I'm sorry... oh, and Usagi goes to MMU

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

Usagi's picture

As does

As does PT, Greenie, and Imagine. And mpekarick, if she is who I think she is. Sorry, M, for spelling that wrong.

MM's picture

Hey I might know her- what's

Hey I might know her- what's her first name?

MM

Usagi's picture

Thanks! I'd actually have to

Thanks! I'd actually have to agree about the annoying freshmen bit, some of them. Greenie and Imagine are quite notable exceptions.

I'm fourteen, by the way.

apples's picture

Well, think about it, I

Well, think about it, I thought you were in my grade at first... plus, I hang out with a couple of freshies that are ok...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

Professor_Zoom's picture

Ahem. I am a freshman.

Ahem.
I am a freshman.

MM's picture

ZOOM!! I LOVE YOUR PICTURE.

ZOOM!! I LOVE YOUR PICTURE.

*Freshmen power*

MM

Professor_Zoom's picture

I thought it was good as

I thought it was good as well.
I call it "Bring it on, life!"

except life is totally bringing it.

apples's picture

wht's in your mouth???

wht's in your mouth???

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

Professor_Zoom's picture

A piece of paper rolled up

A piece of paper rolled up to look like a cigarette.

apples's picture

... no comment...

... no comment...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

Usagi's picture

Awsome pic, Zoom! Darnit,

Awsome pic, Zoom!

Darnit, gotta go. Dinner. I'll likely be back on soon. I do have to get studying done, though, otherwise the possibilities of going to PT's party tonight will go from slim to none.

apples's picture

Say hi to her for me!!!

Say hi to her for me!!! Bai!!!

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

MM's picture

ahh studying. I gave that up

ahh studying. I gave that up about... 10 minutes ago when I logged on here.

Have fun with PT + crew

MM

apples's picture

GAH!!! It's true... you're

GAH!!! It's true... you're 12? Oh yeah, you're B-day's in August too... so we really are pretty much 4 yrs apart... you're kinda like a little sister almost...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be

writingdog's picture

that would be cool! well

that would be cool! well anybody for me is cool except for my real sister. She thinks she's so cool and old because she is in High School.

_______________________________________
"Babbits are awkward bunnys and they want to celebrate easter for an extra day... or they forgot that Sunday was easter and celebrated a day late... either way, The monday after easter is Babbit day."- Babbit

apples's picture

I'm sorry... I'd hate

I'm sorry... I'd hate that...

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I am a little more provocative then you might be,
It's your shock and then your horror on which I feed
So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean,
If I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be