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Glares

Submitted by saveandsound on Wed, 05/02/2012 - 7:26pm

Yes, I see your glares

Its rude to stop and stare

No, I do not care

Cross me if you dare

We will be enemys forever and more

You closed the friend door

Stop pretending like you know me

'Cause everyone here can see

Although we never speak

You can make people go weak

But I shall not be your sitting duck

I will fight through all the bad luck

Till I get the sweet victory

Making the people cheer for me

I hope real soon that they will see

Just how bad you can possibly be

For now I will ignore the glares

But inside I will be making prayers

 

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I really liked this. I had

Submitted by doug.demaio on Thu, 05/03/2012 - 11:18am.

I really liked this. I had one suggestion for a word change. Instead of "Making the people cheery" what about "Making the people cheer for me?" 

If you want to view paradise, simply look around, and you will. Anything you want to... do it. Want to change the world? There's nothing to it.

 

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Submitted by saveandsound on Thu, 05/03/2012 - 5:34pm.

I was actually thinking the same thing. That cheery didnt really fit, so I will be taking your advice and changing it.