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I used to hide things

under tables, in antique boxes and secret drawers

gum wrappers, stone pendulums

tiny

toy

horses

 

I used to hide things 'cause I thought

folks might come snooping

back when I thought my parents didn't trust me

before I made a dish with vodka in the sauce

and my dad left the room

with a distracted "try not to drink any."

 

I used to hide my magic tools

wands, crystals, tarot cards

because I thought they only worked if no one knew

they were there

& now I don't think they work at all,

and my friends see them every time I go for a pencil

 

but it's okay— I say

I only keep them 'cause they're pretty.

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civilized's picture

R

Man, this was written in only 5 minutes? Congratulations on being talented. My favorite lines are "I used to hide my magic tools / wands, crystals, tarot cards / because I thought they only worked if no one knew / they were there". What a great image.

 

-civ