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Horse Storm

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Submitted by Vazrtre on Thu, 05/10/2012 - 8:58pm

Violently they crash

Raging on each other

Nothing so much

As two wild storms

Light and dark

Fighting like a maelstrom

Raging over the plains

Clashing together

Manes streaming

Hooves flashing in fury

In an ultimate battle of wills

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This is really good. At the

Submitted by AllisonV on Sat, 05/12/2012 - 1:42pm.

This is really good. At the end I'm not sure if it was two horses or two large clouds of storms and that makes it so much better. The title really broght me in aswell. It's all in all very good.