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lampyridae
I suppose I should disclaim the fact
that magic cannot be filtered
like the light it produces,
through the prisms of my lips
or of my pen;
it cannot be captured in
seven-point-one megapixels like
a smile or a laugh or a
small black insect that lights itself on fire
when dusk falls.
Magic appears only when dusk falls,
in the twilight hour between
the sun and the stars;
to see it you cannot be anywhere else.
Magic is for those of us who will
brave the bloodsuckers and the
humid air to lean on fences overlooking fields and
watch its lights rise up. Magic is
eternal and it disregards the passage of time;
every summer in this merry land I see it,
same time and same place.
I cannot ever bring myself to pull myself
off the fence or out of the grass;
I cannot tear my eyes from the fairy lights
in the field.
Magic
is a little black creature
with six spindly legs and
paper-thin wings that
lands on your oustretched fingertips
in evenings. Don't you tell me
magic doesn't exist,
because if that's your claim you have never
seen the proof.
Night falls and magic retreats,
but I stay glued to the fence regardless;
my eyes still searching for the last of its traces
and though I know it has only left until tomorrow evening,
I still ache to see it go.
Goodnight, magic,
and be promised I will not leave
for long.
I suppose I should disclaim the fact
that these words have not done justice
to the magic or the creatures that it
manifests itself in,
and that they will never be enough;
but journey down to this merry land
in summertime,
find a fence and a field and a twilight
and perhaps you'll understand
why.
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Beautiful
Threeguesses, this is a beautiful poem. I love how you use the different images to describe the magic of summer without bluntly saying what those images are. Instead you use great figurative language that brings the poem to life. I also like how both the first and last stanzas begin with the "disclaimer." My only critique is a tiny thing, and that is to get rid of the "of" in "or of my pen." It just seems to disrupt the flow of that stanza. But that is such a tiny little thing and this poem is so great!!
-Reina