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Misunderstood
Lost
She’s just gone, dead,
her hearts no longer beating red.
When everything went wrong you stayed strong.
You were her added piece to the puzzle,
what made each day for her no longer a struggle.
You saw something in her.
When she tried to swim, you were the only one
who helped her stay afloat.
You stopped the waves from crashing.
Together the two of you were a steady boat.
And then you were gone.
She was left alone, closed eyes, just trying to hold on hope.
She almost instantly lost sight,
to many long restless nights.
Her happy soul was slowly sinking
appearing to be lost in a constant daydream.
Stuck in the thoughts of the past,
What could have been?
What should have been?
What once seemed perfect turned into a circus.
Drag on the pipe,
Her facial expressions are wiped away.
No one offers anything to say.
Struggling to pay rent,
Countless minutes spent wishing to get swiped away by the current.
Screaming inside,
Tears flowing like a river outside.
Arms spread wide, asking why?
Crawls deeper within
No longer holding the desire to win or feel the rain on her skin.
Just going to hide away till the sun sets at the end of the day.
Doesn’t even hold the energy to pray.
Eyes closed, her soul doesn’t know which way to go.
It starts to snow,
Angles fly down taking her to the place she wants to go.
She was never willing to let you go.
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Beautiful ending. Keep
Beautiful ending. Keep writing; you have the inspiration and the drive to create moving poetry. The fourth line threw me a little bit, the internal rhyme is a little bit off kilter with the rest of the poem, in my opinion. Was there a reason you chose to do that?
If you want to view paradise, simply look around, and you will. Anything you want to... do it. Want to change the world? There's nothing to it.
Thank you! I choose "when
Thank you! I choose "when everything went wrong you stayed strong" keeping it outside of the rhyme because showing stength doesn't always mean you go with the flow, sometimes it's breaking out of the flow that proves how strong you are.
It certainly does make that
It certainly does make that line powerful. Nice work!
If you want to view paradise, simply look around, and you will. Anything you want to... do it. Want to change the world? There's nothing to it.
Thanks!
Thanks!