Other Reads:  Daily Reads |  Recommended |  Audio  |  Genres |  Newspaper Submissions   |  About Us

Please don't be a part of my past. You know who you are.

alexislynn27's picture
Submitted by alexislynn27 on Wed, 08/22/2012 - 8:54am

Can't sleep. 

My mind is wide awake with thoughts 

from saturday,

from Disneyland.

It makes me so sad. 

They're already past. 

They're already part of 

my past. 

I really don't want you 

to be. 

Please, 

don't be a part of my past. 

 

Can't sleep.

Can't think. 

 

  • 647 of 1974

Comment viewing options

Select your preferred way to display the comments and click "Save settings" to activate your changes.

cool

Submitted by baskerville on Wed, 08/22/2012 - 5:59pm.

I like this allot. Your imagery is beautiful, yet mysterious. After i read this, I had to stop and read again,trying to find the hidden meaning. Is this real? Did this happen. Saturday...

alexislynn27's picture

thank you.

Submitted by alexislynn27 on Mon, 09/03/2012 - 3:16pm.

thank you for your praise. Yes, this is real. I tend to write a lot more realistically when I can write about things that have happened, or feel. Otherwise it just feels fake. 

thank you again!

Keep reading and writing!

 

♪♫AlexisLynn♫ 

 La critique est aisée, mais l'art est difficile.