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wind
cuz we all wish we were back in the breeze
feather filled
windowsilled
we are the mesh screen
weaved wires
and
damn we all wish we knew
that chickadee’s
melody dancin’ on the
hot air blowing through my
lungs sweeping girls off
their curls.
and man, no one knows why.
and no one need know
the mystery of
withered whispers
weathered willows
wishful wings,
yeah sure,
okay,
it’s the atmospheric
pressurized barometric
thingamajig that causes something or other
to sneeze.
but sir,
please stop with all
the blibber blabble
scientific nonsense.
what i was saying
was,
what exactly are
these swirls
swivels, blued up
blew down
crazy-ass
(particles of air?)
moving across my lawn,
playing ping pong with the leaves,
brushing dust across the corn stalks.
or in more poetic terms:
where, mother earth, father sea,
did you birth the wind?
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I really, really like this.
I really, really like this. Especially the first stanza. It really caught my eye. Wonderful work.
"cuz we all wish we were back
"cuz we all wish we were back in the breeze/ feather filled/ windowsilled/ we are the mesh screen"
This is awesome. I really loved your choice of vocab and the piece itself was thought-provoking and very different. Well done.
You guys make me happy
Thank you all so much. I think i might do a podcast, because i like the way it sounds outloud.
^.^
allieration
you should, jelly (: