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Elevator
It was a warm Saturday, I was at a soccer tournament and after our game we all decided to go and chill in my friends hotel room. Seven of us, Cate, Taylor, Charlotte, Maddie, Mindy, Sophie, and I all got in the elevator with a random boy from another team.
“Hi i’m Taylor, what’s your name,” Taylor asked the boy.
“Jonothan,” he responded, but he didn't say anything else. When the elevator started moving my friends started jumping. Squeak the elevator stopped even though we weren't even on the second floor yet. For a split second silence, but a second later screaming girls. The boy just stood there helpless in the corner. “Who is squirting water on me,”
Taylor asked?
“Charlotte,” we all screamed at once!
“Sorry I couldn’t help myself,” she squeaked.
“GET ME OUT OF HER, GET ME OUT OF HERE, GET ME OUT OF HERE,” screamed Cate from the the other corner.
“What should we do,” I asked?
“Wait for a minute,” spoke the boy from one of the corners. We stood there quietly, except for Cate who was screaming in the corner. A minute passed nothing happened. Another minute gone. Soon enough five minutes had passed and we were still stuck in the small cramped elevator. Another squeak the elevator started moving up and up and up. Ding we were at the second floor.
“OMG OMG OMG YAY,” screamed Cate!
“Thank god that was over,” muttered the boy who had already started walking down the hall without even say goodbye.
“That was freaky, from now on I am taking the stairs,” Maddie said.
“Tell me about it,” added Sophie. So we all learned their lesson, NEVER EVER JUMP UP AND DOWN IN AN ELEVATOR!
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