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Broken For You
you are around me in
everything I do
I’ll be fine,
and then break.
falling apart
in all the wrong ways
And when I do,
when I fall apart
I mean,
It’s like I fall
apart with all the
hurt and
loss,
and
pain
That is so constant
I forget it’s
there.
At least I forget,
until I start to cry,
And can’t stop
because if I do
I’ll break.
But I break as I
cry silently
my body wracked with
sobs too big
to hold any more.
I thought I missed you
more then I could miss
anything
But that was before
I lost you.
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I really liked this one.
I really liked this one.
If you want to view paradise, simply look around, and you will. Anything you want to... do it. Want to change the world? There's nothing to it.
Thank you
Thank you so much!
I acutally didn't like this one as much when I wrote it, but the more I read it, the less I want to edit it.
Thank you
Thank you so much!
I acutally didn't like this one as much when I wrote it, but the more I read it, the less I want to edit it.
I think my favorite thing
I think my favorite thing about it is the stark honesty. It's like reading hemingway almost; very simple on the surface but so full of emotion and there's this entire story underneath the words that you have to try to compose in your mind. In my opinion anyway. I thought it was very well-crafted.
If you want to view paradise, simply look around, and you will. Anything you want to... do it. Want to change the world? There's nothing to it.