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Everyone's a Critic

Submitted by Thors Apprehension on Mon, 02/11/2013 - 10:44pm

Out of his reach

He said "lord I do not mean to beseech.

But I'm a preacher, can you teach me how to preach?"

Crashing wave,

I know that I'll be workin till the grave,

I'm a slave, Can you teach me to behave

Everyone's a critic in the end

But it's what you choose to do with judgement

That matters here my friends

He was too tall

They shouldn't have given him any thought at all

But they saw, that he had so far to fall

Where to begin,

They tore his body right out of its skin,

It's a sin, He just sat there with a grin and he said

Everyone's a critic in the end

But it's what you choose to do with judgement

That matters here my friends

It's how it goes piss on a rose and say you don't know why

Give it time, maybe you'll see,
My last goodbye.

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This is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I

Submitted by Nicole Faust on Tue, 02/12/2013 - 7:31am.

This is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I listened to the audio, and WOW! You are a great singer, writer, and I would guess guitar player. You are AMAZING! Nothing more I can say; I can't sum it up... WOW!

"But I hoped he would notice me, Talk to me like before...."<

Thank you! You always have

Submitted by Thors Apprehension on Wed, 02/13/2013 - 7:52pm.

Thank you! You always have the kindest words! I love your pictures by the way Helena's my all time favorite actress.

Yes! Finally, someone who

Submitted by Nicole Faust on Fri, 02/15/2013 - 5:38pm.

Yes! Finally, someone who understands! Yes! Go Helena! and Nat [Tena]!

"But I hoped he would notice me, Talk to me like before...."<

Lovely :)

Submitted by Ciel the Sky Mortal on Tue, 02/12/2013 - 11:36am.

Oh yes, this is quite lovely indeed, and lovely and powerful at the same time. I love it, so much! Great writing, great music, love the guitar strumming, fantastic; it just works so well with the words, like lightly putting wieght on the words, if that makes any sense at all haha. Definitly one of my favorites of your works! Great work, as always, keep it up :)

"Even if it lands you in a straight jacket or a padded cell, play the game, but play it your own way."