Due this week

General Writing. Send in your best work – poems, short stories, essays. (Feel free to do it throughout the year, but this gives you a deadline.)
Deadline: Oct. 10.

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Dream

miss_literal's picture

I had this dream last night
that I was making dinner
and he was standing next to me.
I was stirring sauce on the stove
and he was working silently
in that way he has
of not saying anything at all
when nothing needs to be said.
It was hot outside,
one of those summer evenings
when the crickets start to chirp
before it gets dark.
We were standing next to each other
in our bare feet
and our shoulders were touching.
He was so gentle
when he reached out and
pulled my hair out of the ponytail
so it fell loose against my back,
still wet from when we had gone swimming.
I turned and smiled up at him
and he smiled down at me.
I woke up and found myself
wishing for summer.

mixedmusic333's picture

I love this poem.

I love this poem.

miss_literal's picture

thanks. something about it

thanks. something about it just doesnt seem right though....maybe its because the actual dream was so incredible

mixedmusic333's picture

I think it's my favorite.

I think it's my favorite.

miss_literal's picture

REALLY? wow, thanks.

REALLY? wow, thanks.

mixedmusic333's picture

Yes really! I've reread it a

Yes really! I've reread it a couple times.

njandl's picture

Beautiful

I completely agree with your other commenters - I love this poem. It is so clean and uncluttered...the words simply float off the page (screen, I guess) and drop us directly into that kitchen with you. Wonderful.

miss_literal's picture

Wow, thank you so much. I

Wow, thank you so much.
I love your comment : )

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